Mah! The summary had me nervous but I have trust and faith in you and you surely didn't disappoint.
Loved Jeff turning himself in, not that it was a surprise. Even though it was going to be the hardest thing for him to be caged, he was prepared to do it for Jared.
I adore Davis's mother. How she called him Jensen off the bat and didn't try to force herself on him. How she helped Jared just because of Jensen, but had the steel underneath in case she needed it.
Jared's fear for Jensen and the fact that he was his main concern came through so beautifully. The sense of Jensen being rudderless without Jared is so well done and believable.
Even the lawyer is a well rounded snapshot of a character. I love the line about the sharp glint in his eye. It takes a talented writer to give such a strong sense of a character with such a few lines.
I loved this line
*They stand together rocking slow and soft. Jensen clings like his life depends on it and Jared can’t find a reason to not do the same. He can imagine how this looks to Jensen's sister. His mother. And fuck it all. He loves Jensen. He loves him enough to fight for him if that’s what they want and he’s not gonna pretend otherwise.*
In an odd way it sums a lot up for me about this story and the love that runs through it.
I love this story and hold it very tightly to me. I know i've said this before but I'd love to see it published in some format.
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Loved Jeff turning himself in, not that it was a surprise. Even though it was going to be the hardest thing for him to be caged, he was prepared to do it for Jared.
I adore Davis's mother. How she called him Jensen off the bat and didn't try to force herself on him. How she helped Jared just because of Jensen, but had the steel underneath in case she needed it.
Jared's fear for Jensen and the fact that he was his main concern came through so beautifully. The sense of Jensen being rudderless without Jared is so well done and believable.
Even the lawyer is a well rounded snapshot of a character. I love the line about the sharp glint in his eye. It takes a talented writer to give such a strong sense of a character with such a few lines.
I loved this line
*They stand together rocking slow and soft. Jensen clings like his life depends on it and Jared can’t find a reason to not do the same. He can imagine how this looks to Jensen's sister. His mother. And fuck it all. He loves Jensen. He loves him enough to fight for him if that’s what they want and he’s not gonna pretend otherwise.*
In an odd way it sums a lot up for me about this story and the love that runs through it.
I love this story and hold it very tightly to me. I know i've said this before but I'd love to see it published in some format.
Look forward to the next part.