I found the rec for this on Crack Impala. I read it through once, and then re-read it again as I went through and copied each section into Word so I can save it all as one long doc and read it again.

Lovely.

Particular kudos to you for the way you handled Jensen's stumbling speech; you managed to covey diminished speech capacity without it ever feeling like diminished mental capacity. Confused and frustrated, yes; simple, no. Bravo!