Matt's an interesting character to write. He's pulled in so many different directions, so many layers of motivation. It's hard to show all that's going on and what's at stake for him and I think I missed some stuff in chapter 2 that shold have been there.
Major re-writing'll need to be done at some point before I totally pimp this out to every Karl Urban/Kept!verse/fic site that'll have it.
(also, ch 4 is up now.) :)