I just realized I still have to fill the "(babble)" spot. And have to watch an episode of Star Trek TOS to do so. :) But other than that, it's done. After I make the typos and changes you've already pointed out, would you be willing to look it over again as the beta-reader?
The car is ridiculous. I can have AC or acceleration. I crank it up at stoplights and hope it lasts until the next one. Hopefully that'll be fixed over the next day or so. Gonna drive my husband to work tomorrow so I can go to the gym and write.
And nooooo. I do not think I can write Tony Stark. Jake Jensen is enough of a stretch in the banter department. :) I might pull through my abandoned WIPs and see if I have something that would make a good companion piece. I have a Jensen Ackles/JDM fic that died at 6000 words for lack of outside action and conflict. Seriously, I was looking through the chapter notes and it's like "Jensen and jeff sit and talk" over and over and over. In a werewolf fic. Not even sure why I wrote it that far with a roadblock that big in front of me. I guess I just assumed something would occur to me.
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The car is ridiculous. I can have AC or acceleration. I crank it up at stoplights and hope it lasts until the next one. Hopefully that'll be fixed over the next day or so. Gonna drive my husband to work tomorrow so I can go to the gym and write.
And nooooo. I do not think I can write Tony Stark. Jake Jensen is enough of a stretch in the banter department. :) I might pull through my abandoned WIPs and see if I have something that would make a good companion piece. I have a Jensen Ackles/JDM fic that died at 6000 words for lack of outside action and conflict. Seriously, I was looking through the chapter notes and it's like "Jensen and jeff sit and talk" over and over and over. In a werewolf fic. Not even sure why I wrote it that far with a roadblock that big in front of me. I guess I just assumed something would occur to me.