ext_19472 ([identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ladyjanelly 2005-04-27 12:34 pm (UTC)

The beginning is just like three posts back in my lj if you're looking for it. I'm trying to get some feedback here before I post it to the emslash comm or the bds comm.

Like it hurts Murphy to watch someone else hurt.

I always saw him as the more empathic of the two. Connor can light a man's ass on fire and watch it burn. I don't think Murphy would have been capable of that.

Connor went sort of introspective and melancholy on me in this one. I wasnt sure if it was just me being in a mood or if it was IC. Any feelings on that?

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