This almost made me squeal outloud. This is perfect. It's rhythmic touch, it's affirmation of Jared's strength - and it's worked in as casually and perfect as anything I think I've seen anywhere. It's amazing not just for what it's telling Jensen but what it's telling (and doing for) Jared, too.
Now that gets Jensen's attention. “Wait, what?
I had that response but it was another thing that makes me grin. Unexpected is always good, and I really didn't expect Jeff to be straight. It's wonderful.
Jeff shrugs. “He needs it. I like the power; even if it’s not sex, it’s still a rush.”
Good answer! I like that there's a BDSM relationship here without sex. A lot.
Jensen sees Jeff’s hand, there out of Jared’s sight, ready to steady him if his knees don’t hold, and it hasn’t even been that long.
Again with Jeff love. I want my own Jeff. A lot.
Jared squirms his ankle around in the shackle and looks over his shoulder. Jensen catches a glimpse of embarrassed smile. “Leg hair,” Jared says in an exaggerated whisper.
Like a circus stopping for a rat to scamper across the center ring, Jeff stops whatever he was going to do next, bends down, and readjusts the strap until Jared nods and looks relieved.
I giggled. I giggled a lot, in a good way. It's a nice little detail.
And that? Something about the way Jared trusted Jeff to get rid of the not-fun-hurt, and the way Jeff took care of it, hits it home in Jensen's head, that Jeff does this for Jared, not to him.
Light bulb moment, and it's a good one. I like that it wasn't something big but rather something small that got to him. I like that a lot.
I'm going to say here that Jeff explaining to Jared could probably be - not cut out but softened. You're doing such a good job showing what this is giving Jared that you don't have to try so hard to tell, too. I really liked it up until the explanation for the cuffs but in combination with that awesome little moment and earlier explanation it feels like a little bit much.
“Every stroke should be over muscle,” Jeff says, bringing Jensen back into the conversation again. “It’s not healthy to hit along his spine or over his kidneys.” He rests a hand on Jared’s ass, rubbing the welts in.
HA! You took care of the kidneys thing. Trusting you was good *G*.
it makes Jensen's butt clench shut just thinking about it.
I'm dead, but it's in a good way. This is awesome.
The older man’s focus is only on Jared now. Jensen feels like he’s purely an observer for the first time of the evening.
I like this, a lot. I really, really, like it. And Jeff, but I think I've mentioned that?
“You listen to me, Jensen,” he says, and he’s got that John Winchester voice on, gravel and gunpowder and too long on the road. “I’d never let anybody fuck him if I hadn’t talked to him about it first, if he hadn’t known what was coming and agreed to it. And I wouldn’t let somebody fuck him that I wasn’t sure would take care of him.”
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Now that gets Jensen's attention. “Wait, what?
I had that response but it was another thing that makes me grin. Unexpected is always good, and I really didn't expect Jeff to be straight. It's wonderful.
Jeff shrugs. “He needs it. I like the power; even if it’s not sex, it’s still a rush.”
Good answer! I like that there's a BDSM relationship here without sex. A lot.
Jensen sees Jeff’s hand, there out of Jared’s sight, ready to steady him if his knees don’t hold, and it hasn’t even been that long.
Again with Jeff love. I want my own Jeff. A lot.
Jared squirms his ankle around in the shackle and looks over his shoulder. Jensen catches a glimpse of embarrassed smile. “Leg hair,” Jared says in an exaggerated whisper.
Like a circus stopping for a rat to scamper across the center ring, Jeff stops whatever he was going to do next, bends down, and readjusts the strap until Jared nods and looks relieved.
I giggled. I giggled a lot, in a good way. It's a nice little detail.
And that? Something about the way Jared trusted Jeff to get rid of the not-fun-hurt, and the way Jeff took care of it, hits it home in Jensen's head, that Jeff does this for Jared, not to him.
Light bulb moment, and it's a good one. I like that it wasn't something big but rather something small that got to him. I like that a lot.
I'm going to say here that Jeff explaining to Jared could probably be - not cut out but softened. You're doing such a good job showing what this is giving Jared that you don't have to try so hard to tell, too. I really liked it up until the explanation for the cuffs but in combination with that awesome little moment and earlier explanation it feels like a little bit much.
“Every stroke should be over muscle,” Jeff says, bringing Jensen back into the conversation again. “It’s not healthy to hit along his spine or over his kidneys.” He rests a hand on Jared’s ass, rubbing the welts in.
HA! You took care of the kidneys thing. Trusting you was good *G*.
it makes Jensen's butt clench shut just thinking about it.
I'm dead, but it's in a good way. This is awesome.
The older man’s focus is only on Jared now. Jensen feels like he’s purely an observer for the first time of the evening.
I like this, a lot. I really, really, like it. And Jeff, but I think I've mentioned that?
“You listen to me, Jensen,” he says, and he’s got that John Winchester voice on, gravel and gunpowder and too long on the road. “I’d never let anybody fuck him if I hadn’t talked to him about it first, if he hadn’t known what was coming and agreed to it. And I wouldn’t let somebody fuck him that I wasn’t sure would take care of him.”
I love Jeff more.