I like that there's a BDSM relationship here without sex. A lot.
I am really happy how that came out, and completely clueless how to list it in the "pairings" line because some people won't read fics with Jeff's penis and some people are squicked by Jeff/Jared in any capacity and some people love the idea of Jeff/Jared.
Back before I moved to Texas (like 6 yrs ago) I had a non-sexual BDSM relationship with a friend of mine, and yeah, I got a rush out of it, but wouldn't have had sex with him in a million years. I think a lot of people have no idea such a thing's possible.
I giggled. I giggled a lot, in a good way. It's a nice little detail.
Heh. I wanted some little "Ew. Crap. That's annoying" thing for Jeff to fix.
I'm going to say here that Jeff explaining to Jared could probably be - not cut out but softened. You're doing such a good job showing what this is giving Jared that you don't have to try so hard to tell, too. I really liked it up until the explanation for the cuffs but in combination with that awesome little moment and earlier explanation it feels like a little bit much.
It felt a little weird to write it, so you're probably right. I'll go back and see if I can edit that without leaving a hole in the flow.
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I am really happy how that came out, and completely clueless how to list it in the "pairings" line because some people won't read fics with Jeff's penis and some people are squicked by Jeff/Jared in any capacity and some people love the idea of Jeff/Jared.
Back before I moved to Texas (like 6 yrs ago) I had a non-sexual BDSM relationship with a friend of mine, and yeah, I got a rush out of it, but wouldn't have had sex with him in a million years. I think a lot of people have no idea such a thing's possible.
I giggled. I giggled a lot, in a good way. It's a nice little detail.
Heh. I wanted some little "Ew. Crap. That's annoying" thing for Jeff to fix.
I'm going to say here that Jeff explaining to Jared could probably be - not cut out but softened. You're doing such a good job showing what this is giving Jared that you don't have to try so hard to tell, too. I really liked it up until the explanation for the cuffs but in combination with that awesome little moment and earlier explanation it feels like a little bit much.
It felt a little weird to write it, so you're probably right. I'll go back and see if I can edit that without leaving a hole in the flow.