I'm obviously (re: The furniture, too) a huge fan of markers and clear ones - it's something you really excelled at here. They're woven so easily and naturally through the story. It's lovely. And still the best use of a collar I've ever seen in fic *G*
Actually that's almost exactly what came across when I was reading *G* 9's the hardest we've played - what do you want? I like that it's not an offer because it's. *flails* It's an intangible 'bit above' but it's putting it back in Jared's hands instead of Jeff's, and that's where it belongs. It really is beautiful and perfectly done.
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a marker of playtime and not.
I'm obviously (re: The furniture, too) a huge fan of markers and clear ones - it's something you really excelled at here. They're woven so easily and naturally through the story. It's lovely. And still the best use of a collar I've ever seen in fic *G*
Actually that's almost exactly what came across when I was reading *G* 9's the hardest we've played - what do you want? I like that it's not an offer because it's. *flails* It's an intangible 'bit above' but it's putting it back in Jared's hands instead of Jeff's, and that's where it belongs. It really is beautiful and perfectly done.