ext_19472 ([identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ladyjanelly 2007-03-13 02:37 am (UTC)

Re: 4

there's the whole not leaving Jared alone tied up and high on endorphins with someone he's not sure of.

I think Jeff's positive Jensen will keep Jared safe. Worst-case scenario in his head, Jensen rushes to get him free and 'fix this' and doesn't bring Jared down slow. Super-worst case scenario, Jensen sits there in shock until Jared pulls himself together, tips the chair up so the straps fall off the chair-legs, walks over to the phone and calls Jeff, who is still outside.

I can see the point of Jeff putting a little less emphasis on the sex though, you're right about that.

Jensen's new to this! I like that he's trying but not jumping right to something that could hurt Jared. It's good!


Heh. And there's still a tiny bit of their bantering give-and-take, even with Jared tied up over the chair. I wanted to keep them them.

I like the emotional connect as much as I like what's happening

that's the thing for me and porn. The head-space and heart-space are more interesting than what the bodies are doing. I've read hand-jobs that were sexier than toys and full-anal and fisting and rimming and whatnot. I think this was the scene in my head when I first got the urge to write this.

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