he head-space and heart-space are more interesting than what the bodies are doing. I've read hand-jobs that were sexier than toys and full-anal and fisting and rimming and whatnot. I think this was the scene in my head when I first got the urge to write this.

Oh my god yes. It is so easy for porn to turn into a string of 'actions' without impact and I hate it. I like my sex and porn to be about characters I can relate to. If I don't know what's happening with them I can't relate, and if I can't relate it's not hot.

You obviously avoided that and *then* some and YES I love the bantering give and take even with jared tied up over a chair. Their personalities shone through and *kept* shinning. It was fantastic.