The one thing that I can pick out as really making this work for me was your Jeff. I normally think of Jared as really toppy, but your Jeff was so in charge that I could accept Jared surrendering to him.
You had me at "Huh," says Jeff, like he’s more impressed than he thought he’d be. "I’ll get back to you on that, then." and won me for keeps at "That’s what I thought." And at that point the only thing that threw me was Jared agreeing to Jensen watching at the beginning, but since it turned out he wasn't really there to watch, it worked out. Your Jensen won me over at "Are you calling safe-word to getting on the couch?" And that was that.
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You had me at "Huh," says Jeff, like he’s more impressed than he thought he’d be. "I’ll get back to you on that, then." and won me for keeps at "That’s what I thought." And at that point the only thing that threw me was Jared agreeing to Jensen watching at the beginning, but since it turned out he wasn't really there to watch, it worked out. Your Jensen won me over at "Are you calling safe-word to getting on the couch?" And that was that.