I don't see this Jensen letting go enough to let Jeff top him for an experiment, but I think Jensen will use everything on himself before he uses it on Jared, with the exception maybe of the larger toys (since Jared's had more um, practice).
I was really happy how Jeff worked in this. When I was sketching it out in my head, he was just sort of furniture, like a piece of scenery that leads them to each other. And then when he said "Huh. I'll get back to you on that" he completely changed and became a part of the story and that was really cool. I admit I have a really hard time writing a scene of any sort with more than 2 characters in it, so I thought this was gonna kill me, but it went surprisingly smooth.
Heh. I think this is the first I've heard from you (thought I could be wrong). It's all good though. I've really enjoyed this discussion, and you've been a great sounding-board for getting things straight in my head about where it could possibly go.
Friending is cool. I think I already friended you. A lot of time I'll post something here, and it'll be about a week or so before I pimp it out to the groups, so you'll usually see things earlier.
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Date: 2007-03-16 04:18 am (UTC)I was really happy how Jeff worked in this. When I was sketching it out in my head, he was just sort of furniture, like a piece of scenery that leads them to each other. And then when he said "Huh. I'll get back to you on that" he completely changed and became a part of the story and that was really cool. I admit I have a really hard time writing a scene of any sort with more than 2 characters in it, so I thought this was gonna kill me, but it went surprisingly smooth.
Heh. I think this is the first I've heard from you (thought I could be wrong). It's all good though. I've really enjoyed this discussion, and you've been a great sounding-board for getting things straight in my head about where it could possibly go.
Friending is cool. I think I already friended you. A lot of time I'll post something here, and it'll be about a week or so before I pimp it out to the groups, so you'll usually see things earlier.