you wrote more!!!

this chapter was lovely, as are all the others, a really nice continuation, moving their relationship along in that sublte beautiful way that you have in this series.

And, you made some very nice mental pictures in this.

I love your Jensen and his concern, and self knowledge/awareness of his limits, I love your Jared, his eagerness forever in battle with his slight lack of conficence in this situation.

I just love this. Can't wait for the next section.