I truly am loving this. Any help I can be at any point ever, just let me know.

Yeah, I can see Jensen getting the wrong message from lots of situation because of his messed up self image.....and his isolation and quietness would easilly be misconstrued, sad but true.

I just love the way you manage to convey all of that in little sentnces scattered throughout the story...you convey it in the little details, observations and throwaway remarks and it makes it so much more poignant than if you had out and out stated it...it's awesome.

So yeah...you should be really proud of this, it's great.