Great storyline for a start! Wonderful and different. I liked it a lot, I hope you'd do TBC.
You can develop it into an incredible plot, not just a 1/1... Think about it :-) I'd be reading devotedly; but this piece is great regardless! Very good job!
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You can develop it into an incredible plot, not just a 1/1... Think about it :-) I'd be reading devotedly; but this piece is great regardless! Very good job!