ext_16736 ([identity profile] quarterwhore.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ladyjanelly 2007-10-11 02:45 am (UTC)

Since I was a terrible person and didn't comment on this the first time around, I'll do it properly this time.

I adore your Jared from the start. He's cynical and pretty desperate, and I immediately sympathize with him.

Ivan creeps me out. He's an awesome villian.

Excellent start!

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