Uh hiiii... :) You must have been expecting a comment from me (even if a little one)
Lordy knows that i am addicted to your stories. I will give you a more detailed concrit because i always just tend to go "ooh i love this" and bloody leave it as that.
I like the au verse you create, especially in the use of Jensen and Jared and how their relationships build. I am an addict to the scar!verse and this has something that i also love- its a hardass, almost non existant relationship from the begining which will grow in steps - which is what i really like. When Jensen is a hard ass (or Jared) etc i like the relationship build up. I wont lie that i'm slighlty nervous in where this could go, dont want to put pressure on you, but with other fics in the same build up with the two having a relationship, it starts off great and then seems so rushed and the "walls" come down and by chapter three or four the hardass role is completley broken down into a wobbie mess of tears and need. I dont necessary get this vibe from "The Hawk" Ackles and i can work out (to a point in what i read here) his attitude, whilst with Jared, there's something kept in the dark there- he's wavering in and out of control and i like that. I especially like the details with Jensen, the hardass and the semi-break of something else behind close doors.
I look forward to reading more this. I think you and Maddyslash are two of my favourites when it comes to J2. Make that 2, because Andsparkles has some really lovely j2 that i re-read as well. I think all three of your stories apart from the odd one or two that creep up from other authors are the best rps that i've read and enjoy to re-read over and over.
I love scar!verse and i have fallen for this one too. xxx
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Lordy knows that i am addicted to your stories. I will give you a more detailed concrit because i always just tend to go "ooh i love this" and bloody leave it as that.
I like the au verse you create, especially in the use of Jensen and Jared and how their relationships build. I am an addict to the scar!verse and this has something that i also love- its a hardass, almost non existant relationship from the begining which will grow in steps - which is what i really like. When Jensen is a hard ass (or Jared) etc i like the relationship build up. I wont lie that i'm slighlty nervous in where this could go, dont want to put pressure on you, but with other fics in the same build up with the two having a relationship, it starts off great and then seems so rushed and the "walls" come down and by chapter three or four the hardass role is completley broken down into a wobbie mess of tears and need. I dont necessary get this vibe from "The Hawk" Ackles and i can work out (to a point in what i read here) his attitude, whilst with Jared, there's something kept in the dark there- he's wavering in and out of control and i like that. I especially like the details with Jensen, the hardass and the semi-break of something else behind close doors.
I look forward to reading more this. I think you and Maddyslash are two of my favourites when it comes to J2. Make that 2, because Andsparkles has some really lovely j2 that i re-read as well. I think all three of your stories apart from the odd one or two that creep up from other authors are the best rps that i've read and enjoy to re-read over and over.
I love scar!verse and i have fallen for this one too. xxx