Man, I just read all of them together,and wow, you wrote a beautiful story. I mean, the story was fascinating and the characters were perfect--it kept me on edge, but it was also image rich and had a flow that really came together in the last bit--from the moment that Jared beats Brotski to the point where Jensen is carried out of the arena it just flows like a dream.

You pulled the end together is a very satisfying way, Jensen is so heartbreaking.

This story made me feel like I did the first time I saw Rollerball, back in the dawn of time--only better. *g*