Awww. thanks so much for reviewing this one. I feel like it's my funny-looking child that nobody likes but me. :)

I really wanted it to be bleak at the beginning. Both of them trapped into being someone other than who they wanted to be.

I'm so glad it was tense and uncertain. Jared really could have screwed over the small chance he had of getting out with Jensne for a surer chance of betraying him for the boss' promise.

So glad you enjoyed it.