This verse is so so amazing I have no words for it. It is delicate and beautiful, somehow fleeting yet very ver profound. I think I love this chapter the most by far. How you describe Jensen wanting Jared is so innocent making it a little sad. And how you ended with Jared missing Jensen so much. Like both of them have no idea how and why they are attracted to each other. I really want to see what happens next so much I'm shaking :D Oh, and even Jeff...I never sympathize much with Jeff in ANY fic but here he's very multi-dimensional I can't help but feel for him.

Thank you so much for this. This truely is a work of art!