It was so long and pretty! But then again in re-writing it I think I clarified an idea or two, so I guess that was LJ's way of forcing me to write a second draft. *glares at LJ*

I completely got where you were going with Jeff and Jared, and I respect both of them for it more.

Jensen's awareness of his body, verses mine, is the difference between emotional and technical. Sometimes it's nice to re-examine the world from different eyes. *g*