I'd just like to reaffirm the amazingness of this line:

he wonders if sorrows can fly like sparrows or swallows and he likes that idea of them fluttering away with soft wings.

Jensen thinks like an artist, even if all the pieces in his head don't quite fit together. I love the way you write his PoV.

I'm worried that Jared is going to run himself ragged here, which won't be good for anyone.

As always, looking forward to more.