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Heh. Oh yeah. That's why I don't write threesome fic. Too many folks floating around my scene to say "he" very often.

Also, why must they all have a first name that starts with a J?

Inconvenient, I tell you.

Ah well, back to the porn.

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Threesome fic is really awful to write! Usually it's written with the third person directing the events more, because, really, all those arms and legs and assorted body parts...

Yeah, I've got two participants and a watcher, and still it's a bear.

A really kinky bear.

For some reason I write kink only when I've got insomnia. I type it directly to the computer (I hand write all my other fics first). Weirdness.

And there's a preposterous amount of dialog.

Why do I do this to myself?

;)

Dialogue? Grunting. There should be much grunting and touching. Screw the dialogue.

*laughs. Blushes.*

There's. Oh God. There's Jeff explaining the kinky things he's doing to Jared, to Jensen who um, thought there was a domestic violence sort of situation there up until like 20 mins ago. And Jeff has to be explaining them because when he's done, he's done, and Jared will be Jensen's then.

And wow, it sounds silly when i put it like that.

And wow, it sounds silly when i put it like that.

No, no. Sounds, Mmmm, just right ;-)

I'm about 2500 words in.

Almost hoping this bout of insomnia lasts for another couple days so I finish it. But no, not really. Sleep good.

Thanks for chit-chatting with me about the perils of threesomes.

Hee, I'm at work, and I was just thinking, way to go. I'm supposed to be doing the monthly closings and taxes, and here I am talking about (thinking too much about) those three getting it on :-)

Hope you get it finished!

Even if i don't get it done before the inspiration dies, I'll probably post what I do get done up. I think I've only got another 1000 words til the end of the scene, maybe.

This is the first fic that's come to me from Jensen's POV, and I'm amazed that I feel so comfortable with the 'voice' of it. I dunno if it's good, but it feels good. Know what I mean?

Jensen doesn’t feel the slightest spark of invading-Jared’s-privacy shame, not a bit, as he grabs the hem of his shirt and pulls it up faster than Jared can stop him.

“Jesus,” Jensen breathes, trying to make sense of the welts and marks on Jared’s back.

Jared turns fourteen shades of red and starts to sputter something.

“He do this to you?” Jensen's uncle owns four hundred acres of land and a backhoe. Jen's already planning how to get Jeff to come down to Texas.

So um, remember that J2+j2 porntastic thing I was talking about the other day? Was wondering if you'd mind being one of the betas for 4600 words of porn for me.

Jared/Jeff (sorta) with Jensen/Jared following it.
NC-17 like whoa.
warnings--BDSM, I'd call it moderate level as far as the graphicness and kinkiness go.

I need the usual "I dunno if it's sexy, now that I step back and look at it" feedback that I always need when I porn. A little stylistic help, like are all my pronouns clear which "he" I'm talking about, etc.

If you've got some time in the next week or so, I'd appreciate it.

-J

Sure, send it over to allzugern at yahoo dot com

ahem.... TEASE!

also? Yes... to many he's does not a good story make. They must all be J so they can be J3 of course.

:D

Yes, yes I am. Sorry. Sleep is severely underrated.

It's more of a j2 with J2 after. Or something.

J3 porn? *squee*

Hmm. More of a j2 with J2 after. If that makes sense. With kink. Much much kink.

So um, remember that J2+j2 porntastic thing I was talking about the other day? Was wondering if you'd mind being one of the betas for 4600 words of porn for me?

Jared/Jeff (sorta) with Jensen/Jared to follow.
NC-17 like whoa.
warnings--BDSM, I'd call it moderate level as far as the graphicness and kinkiness go.

I need the usual "I dunno if it's sexy, now that I step back and look at it" feedback that I always need when I porn. A little stylistic help, like are all my pronouns clear which "he" I'm talking about, etc.

If you've got some time in the next week or so, I'd appreciate it.

-J

Sure, send it on! embroiderama at gmail.com

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