ladyjanelly: (JEFF)
ladyjanelly ([personal profile] ladyjanelly) wrote2007-07-01 08:07 pm

Fic: Sunny days JDM/DW ch 3

fictional
PG-13


Jeff sits there, on the bathroom floor, holding Dean until his shaking stops, until the fight goes out of his shoulders. He lets Jeff help him up and doesn’t resist as he’s maneuvered into a bath-robe and sweat-pants. If he looked bad before, he’s hell warmed over, now, his eyes red-rimmed and his lips swollen and flushed. Jeff guides him back to the couch and Dean sits down, a frown between his eyebrows.

“So,” Dean says, “About that talk.”

Jeff takes a seat back on the chair. He wishes for the comfort of a good stiff drink, but he can’t risk being the slightest bit fuzzy-headed.

“How about I start,” Jeff offers, “And you tell me if I get something wrong.”

“Go for it.”

“I’m not John Winchester,” Jeff begins, “I’m Jeff Morgan. I never married; I don’t have any kids. I never knew your mother.” He takes a deep breath, wondering if he’s about to get punched. “I wasn’t there when she died. I didn’t put Sam in your arms and tell you to run.”

Dean’s face is guarded, but he doesn’t interrupt. “I’ve never fought demons. I didn’t raise you and your brother. I didn’t train you how to hunt and fight and kill.”

“Your brother’s special though,” Jeff continues, trying to show Dean that he understands where Dean’s coming from, that he will believe the strangeness Dean’s got to tell. “I know how hard you tried to keep him safe. What you said in the bathroom, I’m thinking something went wrong. The demon gate?”

Dean nods, swallows hard. “The demons got loose. A couple hundred, maybe. Slipped loose and scattered. We thought they’d settle close. Possess some locals, make some chaos, small-scale demon crap. Feed on the negative energy in the area or whatever it is they get out of fucking up peoples’ lives.” He takes a shuddering breath.

“They scattered further than we thought. Took over people in power. The president, some other guys in Washington. Key figures in Europe, god knows who else. A week later, it was war. Martial law. Food riots and half the country in power blackouts.”

Dean goes silent for a moment; whether he’s trying to remember something or decide how much to tell, Jeff’s not sure. “That was--fall sometime, two thousand six. Hell on earth.”

“We lost,” Dean rasps, “We lost and Sam sent me away so I wouldn’t die with him.”

“I’m sorry,” Jeff says, “I know what he meant to you.”

Dean’s eyes narrow. “Yeah, about that. You mind tellin’ me how?”

Jeff’s been thinking about that. The DVD would probably be a little much, he figures, so he goes to the file cabinet of all the scripts he’s done or is considering doing. “There’s no easy way to say this,” Jeff tells him and passes the folder marked “Supernatural: Pilot” over.

Dean frowns, and turns to the title page. Jeff watches, as his eyes flick over the lines of type, as that frown deepens. The color fades from Dean’s face, all except a bright splash of red on each cheek like a slap-mark. He stops and turns back to the front, then leafs through to the end.

“What the fuck?” he asks when he’s done. He tosses the script on the coffee table--a sharp movement, barely controlled.

“You wanted to know how I knew you,” Jeff explains. He feels the first little shiver of worry. A pissed off Dean Winchester is the last thing he wants in his home.

“This--” Dean gestures at the scattered papers, “This is bullshit. This is my fucking life, dude, it’s not a TV show. I’m not--not crazy. I’m not some guy who watched Ghostbusters too many times.”

He moves to his feet, agitated. Bisou whines and presses against Jeff’s knee, not used to people yelling and bumping the furniture.

“Dean,” Jeff says, “I’m not saying you’re crazy. I’m not saying you watched too much TV. I’m saying I knew you were Dean Winchester as soon as you spoke.” His hands are out like he’s talking Dean down from a ledge.

Dean wobbles and collapses back on his ass on the couch. “I--this is too much.” And yeah, Jeff can imagine.

“Look,” says Jeff, “I know we’re not any kind of family. But unless you’ve got somewhere better to go, you’re welcome to stay here as long as you like. The spare bedroom’s a studio, but the couch is comfortable and the kitchen stocked.”

Dean nods, and Jeff isn’t sure if it’s an ‘okay I’ll stay’ nod or an ‘I believe you about the couch,’ nod. He holds his fingers out to Bisou, and she crawls over to accept his apology.

“I’m just gonna sit here a while,” Dean says, all his earlier fire gone. “If that’s okay.”

“Yeah,” Jeff tells him, “Sure. Look, I’ll give you some space, but I’m right out back if you need anything at all. Remote for the TV’s there; the laptop has the internet. Just--make yourself at home. I mean that.”

He tries to project just how much he wants Dean here, how much he wants him to stay. Dean nods again, and Jeff leaves him to process all this.

The sun’s still out, warm and unseasonably bright. Jeff sits out on the back porch for half an hour, reading through some scripts he might be interested in, making some calls to his agent. When he comes back in, he’s not all that surprised to find Dean gone.

[identity profile] deathangelgw.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 01:35 am (UTC)(link)
waaaaaaaaah! come back Dean!! maaaaaaaaaaan this is good...

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
come back Dean!!

Next chapter. :)

Glad you're diggin' it.

[identity profile] misskatieleigh.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
*clings*

I love it. Love love love.

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
Hee!

It's fun. I totally didn't want Dean to rabbit in this chapter, but it was the only thing that would fit and be IC so I let him go.
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[personal profile] embroiderama 2007-07-02 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Oh, this Dean feels rather fragile, but he has good reason to be. I love that Jeff is just solid and so very kind.

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
I think "solid and kind" is like my Jeff template. I blame you. :)

And I love your icon.

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[identity profile] angstpuppy.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, you're killing me here.
You did well with the demon's taking over the key and influencial people in government.
But Dean...gone...wahhhhhhhhh!!
I'm sad too that Sam is....elsewhere...

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
I was trying for a slightly different execution of "Hell on Earth." What better way than employing most of the human race in the project?

Yeah, Dean split, but he'll be back.

Sigh. Sammy.

[identity profile] bionic.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
Eeeee! Now Dean, you better come back! Jeff better not find you even more broken and messed up in some alley somewhere...

Loving this! :D

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 03:58 am (UTC)(link)
*laughs*

Was that reverse psychology?

Glad you're enjoying it.

[identity profile] skuf.livejournal.com 2007-07-02 08:37 am (UTC)(link)
Damn, these chapters are too short! Nice chapter. Love Jeff (and Bisou - and Dean, obviously)!

(Anonymous) 2007-07-02 08:47 am (UTC)(link)
i enjoyed reading this! thanks and pls cont soon.
-CharW

(Anonymous) 2007-07-02 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
oh man

I managed to miss the second chapter, somehow, so I've justread that an then come straight on to this, and wow...you're not pulling any punches are you.

Poor Dean, he is coming from one seriously screwed up situation....this is completely fascinating, and I love how you're having Jeff handle things...love this, can't wait to see where you take it.

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And the above message was from me, btw, sorry about the random anonymous posting.

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[identity profile] arabella-hope.livejournal.com 2007-07-04 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Wait Dean NOO.

I love how you had Jeff explain to him - and the backstory of Dean's reality, that is spooky but so very plausable. Sooo excited by this verse.

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-04 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
I was struggling and struggling with this chapter. I told my husband, "I want Dean to not leave. I can write around anything else." Which, of course, meant that Dean had to leave; it was the only logical thing.

He won't be gone long (in chapter-length at least).

Glad you're enjoying. I'm really pleased with the feedback I'm getting for my little under-advertised fic.

[identity profile] sea-yeah.livejournal.com 2007-07-08 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Doh! *smacks self* I just commented on the previous chap without checking if there was a next part.

Oh dear. If I was Dean, I would doubt my own sanity - or at least wonder if this is some kind of weird demon trick.

Can't wait for more!

(Hope you don't mind, I'm going to friend you)

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-08 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, noes, more comments in my inbox! Trust me, that's nota problem.

Dean is so super-screwed.

Friending is great. I have some series that I'm just posting here until I find out if they have the legs to take them somewhere, or if they're just random abandonable plot-bunnies, and even the scarverse, I usually put up for friends a few days before I pimp it out to the world.

Glad you're enjoying these.

[identity profile] koyote19.livejournal.com 2007-07-10 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm finally getting a chance to catch up on this 'verse, and I still adore how it's playing out. Dean is so skittish, and Jeff is trying not to spook him into running...

I love the interaction between them, and the descriptions of how worn down Dean is. He reminds me a lot of Kyle Reese from the Terminator.

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-11 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Kyle Reese. I really like the comparrison. I hadn't thought of it, but it's exactly like that. Stepping from the end of the world to the happy/normal alternative.

Jeff's like my ideal solid/strong character template.

Glad you're enjoying it.
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[personal profile] epeeblade 2007-07-14 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I really like this. This is an original take on this genre. I love this kind of crossover, and I like the alternate universe set up. Looking forward to more!

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-15 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it. The base premise for a crossover feels so lame (I wrote a freakin' magic portal fic. headdesk) so I wanted everything else about it to be as real as I could manage.

Probably won't have much time to write anything between now and wednesday, but seriously, I need to take a day for myself soon.

[identity profile] eisakay.livejournal.com 2007-07-17 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
These three chapters are great, and poor Dean, come back.

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-17 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
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Re: would he give up on sam?

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-07-30 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I love concrit/discussion like this. Very cool.

The thing is, Dean would never ever give up on Sam. He thinks Sam is dead. He thinks his world is gone. He'd still go back if he could, if there was any chance. That's gonna play a huge part in next chapter, and in Dean's relationship to Jeff.

As you probably noticed in my DA/SPN fic, when one of the boys is gone, there's this hole that never quite heals, no matter what shows up.

Thank you so much for the kind words. I really try to get into the meat of the emotions, rather than just what's happening. By saying how the characters feel is the only way I know to make a story real.
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[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-08-04 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
Ahhh. Dean w/o sammy. so freakin' broken.

Thanks for the comments, it's great hearing what people thought.
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[personal profile] tabaqui 2007-09-17 07:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Very interesting stuff! It's just like Sam to do something like this.

And, wow, the breakdown about hot water and soup, that was...good stuff.

And - hrmmmmm...for some reason got the link to your unfinished rps au 'life drawing' fic so i'm poking around your lj reading other stuff.
:)
Hi!

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Damn that sam, saving Dean and stuff without permission. :)

Dude. Talk about survivor's guilt. That's gotta fuck with his head.

Feel free, poke around and stuff. The other un-pimped one is under the "kitty-fic" tag.

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long-winded, EVOL, enabling comments!

[identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com 2007-09-18 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
Ch 1 doesn't appear under the tags of jeff/dean or crossover crack, fyi.

I can see how this wouldn't be an easy series to continue, as the backstory is very bleak. I think the only way to really push the plot forward would be for Dean to accept that there's *nothing* he can do for his old world, even *if* he could get back. He has to grieve for Sam and his friends without any closure or graves to visit; and he has to make his life here, and Jeff would be a natural focus to start with.

Just the alieness of seeing things so similar, but safer in some ways, would be very strange to deal with. Would you have him be a hunter here, or would you rather take the angle that the supernatural isn't real like in his world? I can see either way working; hunting would give him an anchor of familiarity and feeling like he's being useful, but the "non" version could leave him more disoriented and possibly dependent as he strives to prove he's not crazy, it did all happen, and has to form more normal relationships with people, etc *considers*

I'm hoping this *will* continue as slash, in part because I love both Jeff and Dean and like 'em that way. Mostly, though, it's because I don't think I've ever seen any fics with them together; I've seen Jared and Jensen in any combination with Sam and Dean, and one fic with John meeting Jensen (lost it, though *pouts*) but not Jeff. So this would be an original take on the situation and I'm all for that. These guys being as hot as they are, it would be a crime not to make it slash, unless you end up really having to force the Muse for it. It's not like it would need to be graphic, fade-to-black works wonders. I'm a fan of discreet old romances. *grins*

After the initial surge of protectiveness because the guy looks like his friend Jensen/needs help/is really, really Dean who deserves to be taken care of, what would continue to draw Jeff to him? Well, there's the looks, 'cause these guys are both hot. Loneliness on both their parts and being fellows in a weird situation they can't easily reveal to others. Jeff, being a tender and caring guy who thinks it's damn time somebody looked after Dean for a change. (*scowls*) Dean's loving, generous nature eventually re-asserting itself, appreciating this man more than anybody else has before, maybe?

And, omigawd...the fact that Jeff *looks* like John, like his *daddy*, like a happier, more easy-going and open version of the dad he hero-worshipped and for whose approval he longed...that would complicate things, no? Would it make it easier to fall into bed with the guy (hellloo, Issues!) or harder, because dude. Really. It's weird.


Have you ever read cherry_scott's Damaged series? Dean meets Jared after Sam dies and they get together. Very well-written and emotionally rich. In her set-up, it works that Dean and Jared fit together extremely well; but in yours, like I said, I think it would be a mistake. Interesting how a vaguely similar premise of "Broken!Dean from the SPN world loses Sam and comes to our world" can create such different takes on a situation.

I've seen this before, but never broken!Sam in our world, without Dean. I don't wanna, either.

Any way you work on this, it's likely to be a slow write. But worth it! You're really building up a body of high-quality of work, it's been fascinating to watch.




Pesti

Re: long-winded, EVOL, enabling comments!

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 10:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh.
I replied to this in e-mail. Lemme know if you didn't get it.

[identity profile] jensgirl17.livejournal.com 2007-10-14 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
So, where's that next chapter?

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-10-14 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Unfinished. Having issues.

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[identity profile] realpestilence.livejournal.com 2007-11-14 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
I deleted your email, so I don't have that address. Very annoyed with myself, because I thought of something after & have been meaning to mention it to you. *slaps forehead*

From what I remember, you said that your Jeff is very balanced, been through hard times, doesn't take fame seriously,etc. And one of the major stumbing blocks to continuing this is how to explain Dean in the "real world", with his resemblence to Jensen, without dragging Jensen, Jared, families, etc, into it, like a 3-ring explanatory circus.

How attached *is* your Jeff to the life he has now? Is he acting because he still enjoys it or because he can, makes a decent living at it, doesn't have other interesting options, etc? Habit?

I don't think Dean could be a bounty hunter. Too much travelling-he'd be a very visible ringer for Jensen running around, getting spotted all the time. Have to give out fake autographs in airports and stuff, he'd hate dealing with that (you know those crazy, persisten fangirls). I do think any job where he could help people, be useful, and reasonably physically active, is a good candidate for him.(EMT is one I've always favored, personally.) I can't see the lack of i.d. being too big a problem for somebody who's lived a life faking i.d.'s & whatever documentation he's needed-with & without Sam or John.

Jeff & Dean are obviously drawn together, feeling *something* about each other-attraction, interest, genuine human warmth after a long time of isolation, pain, or nothing.

The question is, imo: how attached is Jeff to his actorly life? Could he be happy if they ended up going somewhere entirely different & doing something else? Pursuing art? Something else...in an exotic locale, maybe, where their money could stretch further. I don't see either of them as being the type to need *things* to make them happy; and a more "primitive" or less sophisicated setting would make it easier for Dean to hunt, I'd think. At least the locals would appreciate it, rather than think he was a crazed killer.


Just thought I'd toss it out there, see what you thought. Might job something loose, hopefully.



Pesti

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2007-11-22 03:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Dean? In an airport? Heh. Probably not.

These are sort of the things that got me stuck on this fic.

I think Jeff really does love being an actor.

I'll think about this more though. You've brought up some interesting options.

[identity profile] dogofhell.livejournal.com 2008-01-05 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
wicked concept! can't wait for the next chapter to see how Dean and Jeff are going to deal with their situation.

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2008-01-06 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Alas, I never figured out how to make them work. i'm still playing with concepts, and re-read what I've got but I've yet to find that next step.

[identity profile] remindmeofthe.livejournal.com 2008-01-26 03:58 am (UTC)(link)
This is such an interesting thing for me to stumble across! I have this SPN/RPF fic that's eating my brain, and it's pretty much the opposite of yours - JDM finding himself in the Supernatural universe. I keep writing bits and pieces of it, but it refuses to reveal exactly what impact Jeff's presence is supposed to have on events. Very frustrating. Anyway, it was interesting to read someone else's take on dynamics between Jeff and Dean, since that keeps popping up in my little 'verse. I also liked seeing that I'm not the only one whose Jeff is instinctively protective of "his boys" even when he can see that he's in over his head.

I get the distinct impression from previous comments and the amount of time passed that this fic just isn't getting anywhere for you, and I'm not gonna ask for more. I'm just happy to have gotten a look at someone else's interpretation of this kind of scenario. I really enjoyed reading this.

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2008-01-26 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
That's awesome. I'd love to read yours if you get along with it.

Heh. I love Jeff. His character is such a wonderful protecter to the boys, whether they're J2 or Winchesters in like 3 of my fics so far.

I'm lost in the homeless!jensen verse I've got running, but when that's over I still want to come back to this one. It's like---so close to workable but I can't find that last piece to pull it all together. I've got like 1300 words of the next chapter written, but a lot of them need dumping for implausibility. No way can Dean tag along with Jeff on a movie shoot.

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[identity profile] lomer.livejournal.com 2008-02-03 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
You write the most delicious flavors of crack. *g*

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2008-02-03 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
Heh. Glad I could supply? :)

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[identity profile] calijirl5150.livejournal.com 2008-02-05 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
Very interesting premis - looking forward to it continuing.

[identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com 2008-02-05 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I had a few issues with it but now that I've taken a break I should be ready to move forward. When I get a lull in other fic bursting from my skull.

[identity profile] trishabooms.livejournal.com 2008-02-05 10:50 am (UTC)(link)
Oh I'm so glad you did the fic index thingy! I would have missed this little gem otherwise and its just excellent,

I hope there'll be more.

(Anonymous) 2008-02-05 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I absolutely love this, and I also just had a magical thought. Dean's clearly not in good shape when Jeff finds him, but a conscious Dean isn't going to go to a hospital willingly. What if he passes out somewhere and gets picked up as a John Doe? And when he wakes up, Jeff's name is the only one he knows....

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