Ahh, this is just what I wanted--Mrs. Carr reaching out to Jensen to get to know about what his life is like now, and to come to understand how much he cares for Jared. =)
Some favorite bits:
“He cares me,” Davis says. “Of me. For me. I care him back.”
“Many days.” He pushes his hair back and shows a scar over his eyebrow. “This many days?”
That's great Jensen-think.
Davis’ arms around Jared and Jared’s arms around Davis and it’s impossible to tell which of them is more relieved by the reunion. It all clicks into place as they stand and reassure each other. It’s true. It’s impossible but it’s true. She’s seeing love. They love each other. For real.
Aww, and I'm glad that Mackenzie was able to recognize this.
“I’ll order us room-service,” Mackenzie offers. Something has changed in the way she looks at him. She seems gentler. Less like she’d be pleased to see him get hit by a bus.
Hee (and "yeaaa").
He untangles himself from Jensen. Rubs his back until he settles again and stops searching for Jared with his fingers.
Love that image.
I’ve never seen my son in love before,” she says soft and wistful. “Although I have seen him try very hard to be.”
Aww.
She takes a slow breath. Lets it out. “And other things. Hurtful things. Things no mother wants to think of her son using or allowing someone to use on him.”
Well, that was a surprise.
And the thought of that. Jensen so gentle and sensitive using drugs and rough sex to fill some unknown hole in his heart.
I can see how that would really hurt Jared because it hurts me.
One grammar correction, if you don't mind my pointing it out:
This "He needed something more than Mackenzie and I." should be "Mackenzie and me". The way you can tell is that if you take out "Mackenzie" you wouldn't say "he needed something more than I".
Usually, I wouldn't take it upon myself to point out grammar errors in someone's fic (unless I was beta'ing, of course), but since Mrs. Carr is supposed to be a woman of wealth and privilege (to some extent, at any rate), I figured you'd want her to be using proper grammar.
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Date: 2008-04-12 09:56 pm (UTC)Some favorite bits:
“He cares me,” Davis says. “Of me. For me. I care him back.”
“Many days.” He pushes his hair back and shows a scar over his eyebrow. “This many days?”
That's great Jensen-think.
Davis’ arms around Jared and Jared’s arms around Davis and it’s impossible to tell which of them is more relieved by the reunion. It all clicks into place as they stand and reassure each other. It’s true. It’s impossible but it’s true. She’s seeing love. They love each other. For real.
Aww, and I'm glad that Mackenzie was able to recognize this.
“I’ll order us room-service,” Mackenzie offers. Something has changed in the way she looks at him. She seems gentler. Less like she’d be pleased to see him get hit by a bus.
Hee (and "yeaaa").
He untangles himself from Jensen. Rubs his back until he settles again and stops searching for Jared with his fingers.
Love that image.
I’ve never seen my son in love before,” she says soft and wistful. “Although I have seen him try very hard to be.”
Aww.
She takes a slow breath. Lets it out. “And other things. Hurtful things. Things no mother wants to think of her son using or allowing someone to use on him.”
Well, that was a surprise.
And the thought of that. Jensen so gentle and sensitive using drugs and rough sex to fill some unknown hole in his heart.
I can see how that would really hurt Jared because it hurts me.
One grammar correction, if you don't mind my pointing it out:
This "He needed something more than Mackenzie and I." should be "Mackenzie and me". The way you can tell is that if you take out "Mackenzie" you wouldn't say "he needed something more than I".
Usually, I wouldn't take it upon myself to point out grammar errors in someone's fic (unless I was beta'ing, of course), but since Mrs. Carr is supposed to be a woman of wealth and privilege (to some extent, at any rate), I figured you'd want her to be using proper grammar.