One, I'm always looking for MPREG and how authors make it work in their universe, and I like how you make it happen without too much handwaving. They would have to have continuous monitoring of Jim, and I like how you had them kidnap someone to make it happen.
I also like it how this is all from Nero's POV, because it allows us a certain distance from Jim's and Winona's feelings.
I'm hoping that the daughter isn't dead, but that seemed unlikely. :(
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Date: 2010-01-22 05:34 pm (UTC)One, I'm always looking for MPREG and how authors make it work in their universe, and I like how you make it happen without too much handwaving. They would have to have continuous monitoring of Jim, and I like how you had them kidnap someone to make it happen.
I also like it how this is all from Nero's POV, because it allows us a certain distance from Jim's and Winona's feelings.
I'm hoping that the daughter isn't dead, but that seemed unlikely. :(
What would Jim negotiate for?