Mmmhmm...You're good at this RPS thing, aren'tcha? ;)
I liked that Sean was the initiator in this (and maybe even the bigger slut ;p). It's almost always the other way around.
Norman knows an invitation when he sees one.
^ It's always fascinated me how guys with each other just, you know, one glance, and they know exactly what they want and that it's gonna happen.
How do they do that? Fuckers.
He pushes against soft cotton, turning Sean's back to the wall and he doesn't hear any complaints as their positions are reversed.
^ And Sean lets Norman take control because he probably senses that Norm's a little more comfortable being the aggressor.
Maybe Sean likes that more, maybe he doesn't care cos he knows he's getting off no matter what. Heh.
Sean's hands are pressed to the tin wall like he's afraid he'll float away
^ Great image.
He tries to remember what he likes when he's on the receiving end of this sort of thing, but it's hard to picture any moment of his life before this one.
^ Yabba.
He steadies himself on Sean's hips, feeling the edge of bone under his hands, the flex and pull of lean muscle.
^ Fuckin' hell. I know most people seem to be more into Norman, but, fuck, Sean is almost too physically perfect, IMO.
His fingers drift up over Norman's ribs, just firm enough to not tickle.
^ Love this description.
What I really liked overall about this is that it's very hot, but it also seems realistic.
A lot of people would write it like, as soon as Norman's on his knees, he suddenly instinctively knows how to give the perfect bj.
It was really good how you described his changing thoughts and sensations.
It had a very true "first time" feel to it, without being overemphasized. It had a very natural flow and progression.
But then poor Norm doesn't get his turn! :(
Though that's realistic as well. On a movie set, they'd have to be sneaking around for stolen minutes here and there. Quick liaisons, getting what they could when they could.
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Date: 2005-06-04 10:35 am (UTC)I liked that Sean was the initiator in this (and maybe even the bigger slut ;p). It's almost always the other way around.
Norman knows an invitation when he sees one.
^ It's always fascinated me how guys with each other just, you know, one glance, and they know exactly what they want and that it's gonna happen.
How do they do that? Fuckers.
He pushes against soft cotton, turning Sean's back to the wall and he doesn't hear any complaints as their positions are reversed.
^ And Sean lets Norman take control because he probably senses that Norm's a little more comfortable being the aggressor.
Maybe Sean likes that more, maybe he doesn't care cos he knows he's getting off no matter what. Heh.
Sean's hands are pressed to the tin wall like he's afraid he'll float away
^ Great image.
He tries to remember what he likes when he's on the receiving end of this sort of thing, but it's hard to picture any moment of his life before this one.
^ Yabba.
He steadies himself on Sean's hips, feeling the edge of bone under his hands, the flex and pull of lean muscle.
^ Fuckin' hell. I know most people seem to be more into Norman, but, fuck, Sean is almost too physically perfect, IMO.
His fingers drift up over Norman's ribs, just firm enough to not tickle.
^ Love this description.
What I really liked overall about this is that it's very hot, but it also seems realistic.
A lot of people would write it like, as soon as Norman's on his knees, he suddenly instinctively knows how to give the perfect bj.
It was really good how you described his changing thoughts and sensations.
It had a very true "first time" feel to it, without being overemphasized. It had a very natural flow and progression.
But then poor Norm doesn't get his turn! :(
Though that's realistic as well. On a movie set, they'd have to be sneaking around for stolen minutes here and there. Quick liaisons, getting what they could when they could.
Me likey!