beta-light needed?

[ladyjanelly]

So just about done with the latest chapter of  the scar!Jensen fic.  First time I've porned in a while, and I'd appreciate a critical eye to make sure it has flow and heat and isn't too "him he his Jared he him Jensen his" awkwardness.  And if you find typos or grammar crap, that's good too.

Still typing but it should be done tomorrow night or so.   Any volunteers?

Also: My husband is crazy.  He points out that if you spell grammar like a pirate (with arg at the end), it becomes a palindrome.