Heh. Was the funk-sniff TMi or was it just not part of the 'sweet?'
Glad the realism worked for you. Jared's in this strange place where he's dealing with all these logistics that he's never expected to face, but he's so in love, and so comfortable with who he is. I really enjoyed writing him as the care-taker in this.
I liked the "my boyfriend's an incubus" line.
I ws so close to cutting that one. Glad I left it now.
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Date: 2007-06-02 08:51 pm (UTC)Glad the realism worked for you. Jared's in this strange place where he's dealing with all these logistics that he's never expected to face, but he's so in love, and so comfortable with who he is. I really enjoyed writing him as the care-taker in this.
I liked the "my boyfriend's an incubus" line.
I ws so close to cutting that one. Glad I left it now.
Thanks so much for the big fat comment. :)