I'm glad that your Jensen is being headstrong. Part of what makes him so powerful is the immediacy of everything. His focus on the here and now makes him vital.
You've mentioned that you've had problems writing Jared in this story. The inclusion of his family is a great way to develop him while intergrating humor and warmth.
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Date: 2007-07-21 05:27 am (UTC)You've mentioned that you've had problems writing Jared in this story. The inclusion of his family is a great way to develop him while intergrating humor and warmth.