The intimacy of the whole thing, them lying near each other at the park and Jensen coming back to Jared's. The moment of him seeing the drawing, I loved that. He has such a distorted view of himself, something so far from reality, that seeing that drawing, seeing how Jared views him was such an amazing moment to read.
The thing that put it over the top? Jensen's gone from being nauseous at the thought of being at Jared's house, to feeling comfortable enough to fall asleep on his bed with Jared in the room. That is huge! I'm dying to know Jared's reaction when he realizes and of course what Jensen thinks once he wakes up.
Thank you so much for deciding to stick with this, I'm enjoying this universe immensely!
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Date: 2007-08-25 10:22 pm (UTC)The intimacy of the whole thing, them lying near each other at the park and Jensen coming back to Jared's. The moment of him seeing the drawing, I loved that. He has such a distorted view of himself, something so far from reality, that seeing that drawing, seeing how Jared views him was such an amazing moment to read.
The thing that put it over the top? Jensen's gone from being nauseous at the thought of being at Jared's house, to feeling comfortable enough to fall asleep on his bed with Jared in the room. That is huge! I'm dying to know Jared's reaction when he realizes and of course what Jensen thinks once he wakes up.
Thank you so much for deciding to stick with this, I'm enjoying this universe immensely!