I've given in to the dog-fic. Researching dog behavior and pulling some pics of sleeping dogs just in case I want to draw this scene. Sigh.
I"m good with the concrit. Live for it actually. If the "lay" wasn't in dialog I'd change it, but I don't see Jared saying 'lie' in that instance. Thanks though.
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Date: 2007-08-26 03:37 pm (UTC)I"m good with the concrit. Live for it actually. If the "lay" wasn't in dialog I'd change it, but I don't see Jared saying 'lie' in that instance. Thanks though.