Re-reading it after the 'sad' comments, I think it did find that little bit of conflict/despair/sad that I hadn't planned on at the end.
But y'know. Jensen's just trying to hide how scared he is of returning unconditional love with unconditional love under his fear of being a bad person for having lust too. So don't be too sad for them.
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Date: 2007-09-23 03:52 am (UTC)But y'know. Jensen's just trying to hide how scared he is of returning unconditional love with unconditional love under his fear of being a bad person for having lust too. So don't be too sad for them.