You killed Hettie! In a horrible way, nonetheless... but at least Jensen's safe. Right?
And the others... I feel bad for the poor, poor girl. And Jeff and Jared and everyone in this 'verse. But at least Jensen's fine. Minus the whisperings and the headache and I just want to drag him to a CAT scan or something.
I'm not sure if I've said it before, but you've managed to instill a certain gritty realism into each chapter of this story. It's easy to see the trash and the homeless, the bleakness of buildings, Jared's car, the 'safe place'... the artworks Jensen's created. My heart jumped with joy when he found the glass shards, because yes, those are gems.
If only he could get to a beach, find pieces worn by waves...
I'm rambling again, so I guess I'll be heading to bed now. In conclusion, though: Thank You for this story and all its characters, for what you're doing with them (mostly). It's always a blast to see you've posted. Thank You. :)
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Date: 2008-02-10 01:07 am (UTC)And the others... I feel bad for the poor, poor girl. And Jeff and Jared and everyone in this 'verse. But at least Jensen's fine. Minus the whisperings and the headache and I just want to drag him to a CAT scan or something.
I'm not sure if I've said it before, but you've managed to instill a certain gritty realism into each chapter of this story. It's easy to see the trash and the homeless, the bleakness of buildings, Jared's car, the 'safe place'... the artworks Jensen's created. My heart jumped with joy when he found the glass shards, because yes, those are gems.
If only he could get to a beach, find pieces worn by waves...
I'm rambling again, so I guess I'll be heading to bed now.
In conclusion, though: Thank You for this story and all its characters, for what you're doing with them (mostly). It's always a blast to see you've posted. Thank You. :)