So many lines that I loved in this part, and it was hard to pick my usual favourite but this one said so much, in such fluid terms
*He tries to remember the days before but he only knows a hurt and a fear and a sorrow and he wonders if sorrows can fly like sparrows or swallows and he likes that idea of them fluttering away with soft wings.*
I love the visual of Jensen trying to shave himself like Jared, can't wait to see Jared reaction, especially if he has to finish shaving him so it's a proper job.
Jared's panic both for Jensen, and the other homeless, comes across so well, it jumps off the page at you. Jeff's deliberation about where he can best be used was very believable.
Also have to say I love that Jensen will be living at Jared's for at least the foreseeable future.
Always a good day when I see another part of this. I don't want it to be over, at th same time I want it complete so I can sit and read it from start to finish!
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Date: 2008-02-12 07:02 pm (UTC)*He tries to remember the days before but he only knows a hurt and a fear and a sorrow and he wonders if sorrows can fly like sparrows or swallows and he likes that idea of them fluttering away with soft wings.*
I love the visual of Jensen trying to shave himself like Jared, can't wait to see Jared reaction, especially if he has to finish shaving him so it's a proper job.
Jared's panic both for Jensen, and the other homeless, comes across so well, it jumps off the page at you. Jeff's deliberation about where he can best be used was very believable.
Also have to say I love that Jensen will be living at Jared's for at least the foreseeable future.
Always a good day when I see another part of this. I don't want it to be over, at th same time I want it complete so I can sit and read it from start to finish!