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 Matt Damon/Karl Urban, set in poisontaster's Kept!verse.  Warnings for slavery and all the ugliness that goes along with that.

I'm posting here to see what people think and where it goes before posting it at the  [livejournal.com profile] whatwekeep  community.
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Matt stands at the observation window, the seller, “Mr. Black” at his side. The warehouse floor below is a maze of ceiling-less walls. In a circle of bright light in an open room in the center, a woman lounges on a velvet-upholstered chaise. She looks like a starlet out of 1930’s Hollywood, her blond hair shaped into elegant waves, her lush curves draped in an ivory evening gown. The prize. A delicate gold chain links her wrist to the leg of her seat.

Matt can see her for the bit of theatre she is. Can appreciate the seller putting a little bit of show into this demonstration, even if he knows that in the end he’s the one who’ll pick up the bill. Even if just getting into this room, getting to see this exhibition has cost him more than a year’s worth of his company’s profits.

Men move through the maze. Fifteen of them broken into smaller units of three to five. Coordinated, smooth, organized. Armed, they sweep and clear the maze.

Another figure moves. Smoother than the others, lightly armored, unarmed. He breaks into one of the small groups. Hits the center man and takes his weapon. Uses the soldier’s body as a shield as the pak pak of the other two’s return fire spatters red in the close corridor. He flings his victim at the soldier on his left and shoots the one on the right with the gun he’s liberated from the corpse. Before the last man can untangle himself from his ally, three rounds have been unloaded into his face and the single man is moving on, a weapon in each hand.

The man Matt’s come to see turns a corner, snaps off shots at another group of opponents and two go down. The rest muster up against him and another group turns towards the sound of conflict. In seconds he’ll be cornered. Matt tries not to get suckered in by the show, by the intensity of the action unfolding below. The show that’s just for him. His heart is pounding though.

Matt watches as the man turns and runs back towards the dead end. Runs and jumps and just feet from the end takes a step off the left wall, bounces off the right one, ricochets his momentum until he’s perched on the four-inch wide top of the god-damn wall.

Then he stands. Then he runs. Jumps the six-foot gaps over the corridors of the maze and rains death down onto his opponents. He only hits the ground again when he’s out of ammo, picking over the fallen and taking fresh weapons.

Only minutes after the “rescuer” hit the maze he’s in the room with the woman posing as his kidnapped mistress. Wary eyes looking for more defenders, for hidden traps.

In the observation booth, Mr. Black presses a button. Matt watches as a small box in the ceiling pops open and a heavy dark grenade drops down. Clatters onto the floor by the woman’s feet. There’s no fear on the man’s face as he drops his weapons. Toes pushing off the floor as he lunges. Sprints. Leaps. Covers the grenade with his body.

There’s no explosion, only a clear pop and red splatters the concrete under the man. He freezes a moment and then looks up. Looks at the woman and even from this distance Matt can tell he’s checking her for the paint-splatters of faux wounds.

There’s not a single drop on her ivory skin.

Dark eyes turn up to the observation window. Waiting for further instruction. Through the maze, the fallen rise. Most of them. Matt thinks it’s those that the subject actually struck as opposed to shooting that get up the slowest or not at all.

Matt looks down at the most illegal thing in America. A slave trained to kill.

Mr. Black pushes a different button on his panel. “Kirill,” he says and his voice echoes through the warehouse below. “Come on up, m’boy.”

Matt sort of expects a slave with Kirill’s skill-set to be plain. Utilitarian. As he strips off the paint-spattered vest and turns to stand at parade rest, nothing could be further from the truth. Matt’s seen less attractive body-slaves. Even out of combat, Kirill has intense hazel eyes. The slightest sheen of sweat glistens over full lips, high cheekbones. His hair is dark and cropped short but it’ll grow out. His beard is short enough to show his clean jaw-line. He’s angular but not sharp. The thin strip of leather of his collar just accents the graceful stretch of his throat. Matt feels a pang for his poor wallet, but this is the one. He’ll be worth every penny.

“Kirill here is a one-of-a-kind find,” Mr. Black begins as if he could read Matt’s mind. “Conditioned to total loyalty, total obedience. He’ll kill for you, die for you. Most important, he’ll think for you. Strategize your safety, organize your security detail. Perform autonomously if you are ever unable to give him commands. He speaks four languages, has been tested in surviving in urban wastelands and remote wilderness. He can use every sort of modern firearm there is, from a holdout pistol to a sniper-rifle. He can drive, he can fight, he can make sure that wherever you go, you’re the guy walking out alive. Whatever you need him to do, he can do it.”

Matt forces himself to take a slow breath. To not show how perfect Kirill is. How much he wants him. Needs him.

“Can he blend in? Can he not look like--that?”

Mr. Black shrugs. “He could pass as a body-slave of mediocre training, but his performance would suffer. In private? He will let you do what you want, but he hasn’t been trained for pleasure.” The man pauses. “He doesn’t have a provenance of his own, but we have the paperwork and chip of a slave who was never reported as deceased. A young male named Karl, conveniently enough. It should stand up to most security checks, should you decide to travel with him.”

This--Jesus. A “slave” who’s never been through Commerce isn’t a slave at all. “How much?” Matt asks, because he didn’t come this far to walk away without what he needs. Doesn’t have time to start over.

Mr. Black names a price. There are a lot of zeros in it.

One wire transfer later and it’s over. Matt owns his assassin.






Date: 2010-01-05 10:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trishabooms.livejournal.com
I like this. I'm intrigued to know why Matt wants a slave like this one and who Matt is, a Lord? You could actually make this canon with PT's story if you wanted to, as she has Matt as an ex owner of Jensen, albeit briefly. A Lord needing a slave who is a trained assassin has endless possibilities.

Kirill/Karl is no less interesting. Where has he come from, who has conditioned him and why. How will he react to Matt?

Fascinating stuff.

Date: 2010-01-05 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Hrm. I had forgotten that Matt owned Jensen at one time. Do we know when? Was Matt one of Tom's circle or someone after? If it was after, i can work with that, make this set earlier in the timeline.

Date: 2010-01-05 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trishabooms.livejournal.com
Matt was quite some time after Cruise. Jensen went from being the property of Ben Affleck when he was 21 to being owned by Matt when he was twenty two. Matt sold Jensen to Leonardo DiCaprio when Jensen was twenty five, so it wasn't as brief an ownership as I thought.

Just to add to this Pt has Affleck *giving* Jensen to Matt when he gets married because his wife Jennifer Garner doesn't want Jensen around.
Edited Date: 2010-01-05 04:54 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-01-05 05:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
That...actually works out about perfect for the timeline I was thinking. Jensen's about 8 yrs younger than Matt, so Matt would have been around 30 when he got Jensen. This could be about 3 years before that. Awesome. Thanks for the tidbit.

At this point in time in my fic, Matt's uncle is lord of the Damon family, but that should change in the near future.

Date: 2010-01-05 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1orelei.livejournal.com
Wow. Can't find words... other than wow.

Date: 2010-01-05 05:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
So I'm playing around with this new thing for me. It's called plot. Strange but exciting. I actually have a clue where this is headed. :)

Date: 2010-01-05 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 1orelei.livejournal.com
Hey, whatever this bizarre plot thing is, it's working!

Oh, and words did come to me eventually. They were along the lines of: why would Matt trust these people - people building illegal assassin/slaves - to transfer 100% loyalty over to him? It's not like there's oversight for this stuff, or he could sue for contract violations if something went wrong. I mean, if I were Mr. Black, and I could condition loyalty, I'd keep 5% trained indefinitely on myself. ;)

Date: 2010-01-05 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
I'd actually been debating all that but decided not to go too deep into it because it was getting clunky. I was thinking about Mr. Black incapacitating Karl in some way (tranq dart to the back or an electrical charge in the collar) before he left, since Matt could make his first order "kill that man."

On Matt's side, I think some of the vast money he's spent just getting into this room was spent on his own security and research. I just wasn't sure how to show that without getting distracted from the story I wanted to tell.

Date: 2010-01-05 12:34 pm (UTC)
kentucka: kitty ears ([b13] Leito / jumping)
From: [personal profile] kentucka
I love it when I'm reading my flist and first there's "damn plot bunny" and the immediate next post is "oh and here's the first chapter" from you :D

loved the setup and the wargame action. Kirill kicks ass :D I'm really looking forward to the rest.

Date: 2010-01-05 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
It ate my brain! How unfair is that??

I've been playing with the idea of a non-sex slave for a while. It just all sort of clicked last night.

Date: 2010-01-05 08:13 pm (UTC)
kentucka: kitty ears ([b13] Leito / black eyes)
From: [personal profile] kentucka
that's not to say that there won't be a certain, erm, attraction between them, right? XD

oh and yes, you're dead right about Parkour. the guy in the icon is David Belle, in his role as Leïto (Banlieue 13).

Date: 2010-01-05 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Oh yeah. Definite attraction. And complications. in some ways, this Karl is better off than say PT's Jensen, and in other ways, not-so-much. Just sex has never been his primary function.

Duuuude. I know what I"m gonna go buy tomorrow. That looks awesome and the hubby should like it too. Parkour is beautiful.

Date: 2010-01-05 09:47 pm (UTC)
kentucka: kitty ears ([misc] Jason Behr / what an ass)
From: [personal profile] kentucka
I haven't read poisontaster's 'verse, but frankly the idea of a slave not purchased (only) for sex is more intriguing to me. probably because it's less of a trope. not to say that tropes are bad ;) but it's a rare sight and I definitely like that.

you're gonna love it! Damien and Leïto are both amazing as characters, also very slashy. the movie has loads of Parkour and martial arts (Cyril did the choreography for the stunts himself), and there are definitely fewer WTF? moments than in your average action movie.
while you're at it, you can buy its sequel Banlieue 13 Ultimatum as well :)

Date: 2010-01-05 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Your icon guy looks like he's doing Parkour. I've been watching videos of it for fic inspiration.:)

Date: 2010-01-05 01:36 pm (UTC)
embroiderama: (JDM - El Sid)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
Oooh! This is intriguing, a kind of subversion and abuse of the system, and I'm so curious to know Matt's motives.

Date: 2010-01-05 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
I've been playing with the idea of a non-sex slave for a while. It just all sort of clicked last night. Sort of like when I'd been playing with the idea of a mentally damaged artist types and someone gave me a prompt. :) Glad it's got ya hooked.

Is that Jeff icon from Sliders?

Date: 2010-01-05 02:39 pm (UTC)
ext_3058: (Default)
From: [identity profile] deadlychameleon.livejournal.com
Very cool idea! Minor note - provenance, not providence in the third to last paragraph.

Date: 2010-01-05 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Oh, thank you so much. I was typing one-handed, holding the baby with the other and whatever I was putting in kept turning red so I thought I must have made up provenance. Thanks again.

Date: 2010-01-05 03:07 pm (UTC)
epeeblade: (Default)
From: [personal profile] epeeblade
Very intriguing. Definitely worth posting to the comm!

Date: 2010-01-05 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Thank you. This is gonna be sort of plot-heavy, and I might get where I need a detail to have been slipped into an earlier chapter and I feel more comfy doing that in my own journal before it's all pimped out to the world and stuff. Also, there's always the slim chance of a unfinishable WIP with me, so I'll leave it here where people know to expect that sort of thing from me. :)

I've been playing with the idea of a non-sex slave for a while. It just all sort of clicked last night. We'll see if it works.

Date: 2010-01-05 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twelve-pastels.livejournal.com
Ooh! I'm intrigued.

Date: 2010-01-05 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
This is the fic that's keeping me up at nights and EATING MY BRAINS.

Date: 2010-01-06 03:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twelve-pastels.livejournal.com
As long as it doesn't eat too many of your brains and leaves enough for typing. :D

Date: 2010-01-05 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rednihilist.livejournal.com
I love this! An awesome storyline with you at the helm over here?

Can't wait for more, m'dear!!

Date: 2010-01-05 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
I am a not-the-best plotter, and this fic is like 75% plot, so I'm definitely stretching with this one. Trying to keep it as simple as I can and still let the boys have enough room to interact. Soo tricky, this.

Date: 2010-01-05 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ixchel55.livejournal.com
Even though I'm not a huge fan of 'slave' fics, I love most of what's gone into the 'Kept!verse'. I think because it broadens the view to more than just sex slaves. It's a fascinating and complex 'verse and I think this is going to fit in beautifully. I can't wait to read more and I definitely think you should post it at [livejournal.com profile] whatwekeep

Date: 2010-01-05 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Thanks. I'm gonna make sure it goes where I think it will, and that I don't need to do after-posting edits to the storyline before I share it with the wide world, but so far I'm really happy with how chapter 2 is shaping up and how the boys are playing nice (or not-so-nice) together.

I like sex-slave fics in moderation, but I kinda want to do something a little less hormonal with this for some reason.

Date: 2010-01-05 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ixchel55.livejournal.com
Oh, believe me, I have absolutely nothing against sex slaves, I just don't really want to read fic that focuses on nothing but that.

Date: 2010-01-05 10:17 pm (UTC)
lapillus: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lapillus
I think it looks like an excellent addition to both your works and to the Kept 'verse and am looking forward to where it's heading. If you're not quite feeling like posting in [livejournal.com profile] whatwekeep then maybe post a note that you're playing with the story over here.

Date: 2010-01-06 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
I'm playing around with getting a little more plottyness into a fic. Finding that balance between "two guys interacting in a vacuum" and "two guys in so much shit they don't have time to talk, much less fuck." Tricky, that.:)

Date: 2010-01-05 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomer.livejournal.com
Ooo, I love this!

Date: 2010-01-06 08:10 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-01-06 01:39 pm (UTC)
ext_302153: (hawt)
From: [identity profile] live-laugh-love.livejournal.com
this is really intriguing. I find myself with all kinds of questions and a desire to read more. You pack a lot into this bit!

Date: 2010-01-06 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
For a 1000 word first chapter, I'll call that a nice compliment. :) Kinda tricky to slip the foreshadowing in when I don't have all the details of what happens next yet.

Date: 2010-01-06 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faithette.livejournal.com
Ooooh, this is fabulous! I love your writing and I love the Kept!Verse, so this is the best of both worlds.

I look forward to reading more!

Date: 2010-01-06 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Thanks.:) Chapter 2 is just about done, so expect more soon!

Date: 2010-01-06 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wlma.livejournal.com
Well. I am always happy to find something new here.
I discovered the Kept!verse a while back, and am forever waiting impatiently for something new.
So, now, your stories, in that 'verse. With Karl.
I can't really ask for more.

I can't wait to see where this goes.

Date: 2010-01-06 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Karl is totally my new celebrity crush. :)

Chapter 2 is just about done and should be up later tonight or tomorrow. And it's twice the length of this one.

This fic is eating my brain.

Date: 2010-01-07 03:23 pm (UTC)
silentflux: (Default)
From: [personal profile] silentflux
Very awesome start :) I can't wait to see where you're taking this :)

Date: 2010-01-08 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it.:) Chapter 2 is up, and 3 should be sometime today. Just follow the tags.

The weapon

Date: 2010-01-08 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] argentine65.livejournal.com
I really like the start, quite original and I would love keep reading the story. Thank you for sharing. Martha

Re: The weapon

Date: 2010-01-08 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it.:) Chapter 2 is up, and 3 should be sometime today. Just follow the tags.

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