Date: 2007-06-02 05:45 am (UTC)
Funk-sniffing aside, this was sweet. Realistic, too-you have an uneven amount of sexual experience here. I like that Jensen let Jared explore and made it comfortable for him, let him be the one in charge and be all care-takey.

I think Jensen is by nature a very sensual lover, from the way he has to hold himself back. Even that small amount of alcohol in the last chapter affected his tight control over his desires, so...passionate, yes. I think Jared has the potential to be so, as well; he just needs to be coaxed along and made comfortable enough to trust completely. I liked the "my boyfriend's an incubus" line.

They're so good together, it almost makes me annoyed they're not real.


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