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Cat-fic.
Trist's first evening prowl on two legs.


Jensen sleeps. Trist tries the words out, feeling the way “sleeps” stretches out all lazy and long. Jensen sleeps and Trist is bored. He walks around the apartment, looks out all the windows for something to play with. Sometimes there are fast-slither geckos eating the flutter-bugs by the light. He sees one but it won’t play with him, too far away to chase through the glass.

He checks all the corners because once there was a crunchy-fat bug there and it was fun to play with it and tasty to eat it.

He doesn’t find any crunchy bugs and corners are boring when they’re empty.

Trist sniffs at the garbage, but he knows that Jensen is mad when the garbage falls over and sometimes he fusses at Trist when that happens. He licks his lips, tasting the faint residue of the tuna on his own skin. Tuna was good. The garbage smells like tuna, and Trist looks for something else before Jensen gets mad.

He sniffs around the rest of the kitchen. His nose isn’t right still. He can’t smell all the little tasty things he used to be able to, but being up high makes up for it. He smells the place the water comes from, licks at the tiny drip. There’s a hole where the water goes on each side of it. In one there’s a metal grid blocking him but the other side smells tastier and he puts his pa--hand past the rubber thing and into the damp hole. His fingers come out all nice and smelly but there isn’t any food there.

His elbow bumps a jar of pens on the counter and he chases them as they scatter, until they’re all pushed into corners or under the stove. The cloth-thing, the “buh-lan-kit,” gets lost somewhere along the way but Trist figures if he has no fur, it’s better to not have the thing rubbing on his skin.

His belly is sort of empty and he nuzzles the canister his food stays in. He can reach it now, and that’s good. Maybe if he loves on it enough it’ll be nice and feed him. Happy food-holder. Good food-holder.

He doesn’t mean to push it. Maybe he does. Being so big makes it hard to accidentally do things. The canister falls off the flat-space and Trist tries to bat at it as it slips past. The lid just comes off and a million billion tiny toys fly out of it. It’s the best thing ever and Trist pounces on the bits as they scatter. They keep moving, sliding on the floor. He eats some of them but even when he’s full of crunchies they’re still so tempting.

He chases the food-pieces until he’s bored again. It takes a long time. Much longer than the pens.

Then he’s bored and he’s lonely and he misses Jensen.

Jensen sleeps and Trist wants to go to him but the door is closed. All the way closed instead of like it usually is, just partway closed with a shoe in the way. Why is it closed if Trist is on the wrong side?

He pushes the crack with his face and then with his hand and it won’t move. “Jensen?” he calls. He wants Jensen. It’s important. “Jensen Jensen? Jensen. Jensen?”

Trist kneels by the door, trying to push in, to smell what’s happening, why he’s been locked out. Trist is never locked out.

The door opens and Trist is leaning on it so hard he almost falls in. Jensen smells like sleep and Trist moves forward to press his nose against Jensen's bare belly, breathing in the scent. Jensen's here and he won’t be bored and lonely anymore.

“Trist, no,” Jensen says, but not like he means it. “You have to stay out here now.”

Trist slips past him and into the room and he’s happy again. Close to Jensen and on the right side of the door is all the places he wants to be.

“I’m sorry,” says Jensen, and his voice sounds not-right, all hoarse and broken around the edges. “Come on. You sleep on the couch.”

He tries to pick Trist up but Trist twists in his hands, getting too close to be pushed away. Jensen trying to put him out feels bad, worse than the carrier, worse than the thing outside that makes all the noise and takes him to the smell-bad sharp-pokes place. It hurts his--his arm, and Jensen's never ever never hurt him before, he’s always so careful, picking Trist up with one hand under his ribs and the other scooping up under his back legs.

This isn’t right at all.

“Jensen!” he cries, “Jensen. Jensen.” His face feels funny; his not-seeing-right eyes get seeing even worse and his nose isn’t letting the air in. He clings to Jensen's waist, desperate to not be shut out. He holds tight, but careful--no claws. No claws at all. Can’t hurt Jensen but can’t be shut out.

Jensen sighs and Trist thinks he’s won. “Oh, kitty,” Jensen says and sinks to the floor to hold him. Trist nuzzles in against Jensen's neck. “I’m sorry,” he says, but Trist still doesn’t know what that means, “I’m so sorry.”

There is petting though, Jensen's hands stroking his hair, over his back. He sniffs, because Jensen smells so good.

And then--Jensen sniffs him back, which only happened that one time when the food made his tummy hurt and came out bad, and Trist is horrified to think that maybe he smells bad and can’t tell. He would--he needs a bath, he needs a fur-cleaning tongue, or maybe a naked-skin cleaning one and--

“Oh my god,” Jensen says, like Trist smells really really bad. “What is that on your breath?”

“Treats!” says Trist, so proud to have remembered the word. “Fooood.”


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Date: 2007-09-27 02:25 am (UTC)
epeeblade: (Default)
From: [personal profile] epeeblade
OMG, SO CUTE. And poor Trist. I wonder if that's how my dog feels when I lock him out of the bedroom:)

Date: 2007-09-27 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Poor puppy alll alooone on the wrong side of the door...

Heh.

Glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2007-09-27 02:28 am (UTC)
embroiderama: (Jared - smiling)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
Oh my goodness, kitty!Jared just never gets old. This totally made me smile.

Date: 2007-09-27 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
I'm sure it would eventually.

Hopefully there'll be something to distract him by then. :)

Glad you're enjoying.

Date: 2007-09-27 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guard-the-cards.livejournal.com
awww jared is so cute, and so terrified about this. and I want him to be okay and start understanding but then he'll losoe that innocence

Date: 2007-09-27 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
He's so confused right now. He's got layers of emotions that are brand new to him. Poor kitty.

Date: 2007-09-27 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nova-berry.livejournal.com
I love this fic like...like...nothing else, ever! ♥♥♥

omg

Date: 2007-09-27 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nova-berry.livejournal.com
I woke up at freakin' 4:45 this morning and couldn't get back to sleep -- my stupid brain went straight to Trist's kitty-sadness at Jensen trying to put him out of the bedroom, and I was all SADFACE and unable to sleep!

WHY do I love this story so much? I think it's the kitty POV and picturing JARED as a kitty-man.

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Date: 2007-09-27 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mermaid4fic.livejournal.com
I just belatedly read part 3, and I refreshed your journal and part 4 magically appeared! Trist's view of the world is hilarious, cute and sad all at once, and his love for Jensen is so palpable. Lovely stuff :)

Date: 2007-09-28 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
The magic of teh internets.

So glad you enjoyed it. Silly kitty. And he loves his Jensen so much.

Thanks.

Date: 2007-09-27 03:04 am (UTC)
tabaqui: (samseriousbyanteka)
From: [personal profile] tabaqui
Oooooooh, man, man, man. This is the purest, most high-grade crack *eveh* i swear.
I *luff*!

And treats are *fun*! And cruncy-bug! And on the *wrong side* of the door, yes, and poor Trist, crying!
*pets him all over*
*cough*
I'm not a perv.
:)

Date: 2007-09-28 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Heee!

I almost had Trist find and eat a crunchy-bug. It seemed like a little much though.

You can't be more of a perv than I am, so um, not gonna point fingers. :)

Date: 2007-09-27 03:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elmathelas.livejournal.com
::happy sigh::

just now, reading this fic was all the places I wanted to be.

Date: 2007-09-28 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Yay!

So glad I could provide you with your crack fix.:)

Date: 2007-09-27 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vily.livejournal.com
Aw the sad kitty! However, every true cat knows how to get a paw under the door and rattle it back and forth. Though I guess it's different when you go from kitty paws to Trist paws.

Date: 2007-09-28 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
You know? I've never had a cat do that. Huh.

Date: 2007-09-27 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aislinn-tredor.livejournal.com
Oh my god.

*is ded from the cute*

Maybe if he loves on it enough it’ll be nice and feed him.

lol, ah kitty!logic:)

And he doesn't realize that he now has the ability to turn door handles and get to Jensen that way ^.^

And crying! He tears up for the first time! Wraps around Jensen's waist! Snuggling!

And treats. They still taste good on a human tongue? ^^;

I love. Thanks so much for the new chapter:)

Date: 2007-09-28 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Heh. Trist is my silly little train-of-concousness muse. He just rambles off onto the screen.

Opposable thumbs will be Trist's next chapter.

Poor kitty has all these reactions and emotions that cats don't quite get to, and he's got no coping mechanisms.

They still taste good on a human tongue?
You allllllmost tempted me into going to check.

But I think I'll stay guessing. They taste good to Trist at least.

Date: 2007-09-27 04:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evolardnek.livejournal.com
I'm loving this chapter i like how u use your real life experiences with your cat and you mix it with your story my fav. part is

“Oh my god,” Jensen says, like Trist smells really really bad. “What is that on your breath?”

“Treats!” says Trist, so proud to have remembered the word. “Fooood.”

GREAT CHAP. KEEP IT UP!!=^_^=

Date: 2007-09-28 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Yay! Glad you enjoyed it. Silly little Piff. I mean Trist.

Oh noes!

Date: 2007-09-27 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cattraine.livejournal.com
Kitty needs a bath and his teeth brushed! Hiss! Yowl! LOL

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Date: 2007-09-28 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Heh. Jensen's got his work cut out for him to lose the "worst cat-dad evar" title.

Date: 2007-09-27 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lekkerstuk.livejournal.com
I'm not sure if Trist can get any cuter! And now I'm feeling guilty for all the times I go to bed when my cat wants to play.

I'm just imagining what a menace Trist will become when he gets used to his paw-hands. Once he can work doorknobs and the fridge door Jensen will know no peace!

Date: 2007-09-28 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Aww. You're not a bad cat-mommy.

OMG when Trist realizes he has Thumbs...Jensen's life may never be the same.

Date: 2007-09-27 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angstpuppy.livejournal.com
Bathtime!
Heeeeeeee...still lovin' it so, so, so much.
And still lookin' for the perfect kitty!trist pic....

Date: 2007-09-28 03:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
The sink of DOOOOM!

So glad you're enjoying. And again, thanks somuch for the pretty pretty art.

Date: 2007-09-27 06:46 am (UTC)
minim_calibre: (Default)
From: [personal profile] minim_calibre
HEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

Date: 2007-09-28 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Yay!
Thanks

Date: 2007-09-27 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kendas.livejournal.com
Awe, poor Trist all confused and hurt and totally bewildered at Jensen's behavoir. This is so totally adorable. I keep becoming more smitten. And there are so many little things in this chapter I loved. Trist finding the treats, and the way he sat outside Jen's door calling his name, his turn of phrases for things. Really, the way you write Trist's pov is just fantastic.

Date: 2007-09-28 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
He's one of those stream-of-conciousness muses that just flows out onto the keys, and the less I think the better he flows. He's a joy and a surprise to write.

Thanks so much for your kind words. I still need to reply to the one you left for the Jen-bot fic. Damnation, I'm so behind.

Date: 2007-09-27 07:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avid-slacker.livejournal.com
I hated that Trist got locked out.
I know Jen feels guilty about his inappropriate feelings, but Trist doesn't know any better and now he feels all abandoned. I almost wanted to cry for him.

Date: 2007-09-28 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Next chapter Jensen'll have to redeem himself, I think. The situation is difficult for him, but just as hard for Trist.

Sorry you were sad. Glad it felt that real though. If that makes sense.

Date: 2007-09-27 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indigo-blind.livejournal.com
This is like the best kind of crack!

Date: 2007-09-28 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Yay!
Thanks!

Date: 2007-09-27 08:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celaeno7.livejournal.com
Okay, this is adorable. ^_^ Jensen is going to have to introduce kitty to the wonderful world of sugar very, very soon.

Date: 2007-09-28 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Oh god. I think he's gonna hide it from Trist. that'd be bad. Really bad.

Date: 2007-09-27 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elektrik-storm.livejournal.com
my poor Trist! *whimpers* this has made me really sad... granted, i'm a little emotional! Jensens “I’m so sorry.” is just perfect! i cannot wait for more!

Date: 2007-09-28 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Jensen's definitely got some redemption to work on. This is stressful to him, even more for his poor kitty.

Date: 2007-09-27 02:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] couchemal.livejournal.com
HAHAHA HE ATE KITTY TREATS AND KNOCKED ALL THE PENS UNDER THE FRIDGE!! ILU AND THIS FIC! And then he cried and my little black heart was broken. Evil!

I read somewhere that cats' sense of smell is equal or better than a bloodhound's, if you can believe that, and they can hear sounds either 60 or 40% higher than a person. I bet poor Trist feels deaf.

Date: 2007-09-28 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
He feels all blind and deaf and non-sniffy.

So glad this is tickling you.

Poor kitty. (It'll get better.)

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Date: 2007-09-27 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elucreh.livejournal.com
Looooots longer than the pens. *g*

I cannot stop cracking up...mostly at how much I can totally see Jared acting like this.

And Jensen putting him out feels wrong, and the panic when Tris thinks he smells bad is just...

There are not sufficient words for your genius. None at all.

Date: 2007-09-28 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Hee!

So glad you enjoyed it.

Trist was all "OMG. Food that moves!" best toy evar.

Date: 2007-09-27 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eisakay.livejournal.com
Awww. Man, this fic is just so cute. And poor Trist being left on the wrong side of the door and not knowing why.

Date: 2007-09-28 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Heh. Pooor Trist. Jensen's got some redeeming himself to work on next chapter.

Date: 2007-09-27 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] editorzon.livejournal.com
I think Jensen needs to be squirted with the water gun. Bad Jensen, no treats for you.

I now have massive mommy guilt for shutting my cats out of the bedroom when trying to sleep.

This is the best crack ever!!!

Date: 2007-09-28 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Jensen's got a lot to make up for, that's for sure.

No guilt. Kitties forget fast enough.

Date: 2007-09-27 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angstpuppy.livejournal.com
Hi, hi! Just sent you a couple presents to your hotmail addy. Hope you like them!

Date: 2007-09-28 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
That's awesome. Thanks so much. Didja get my reply?

You should post it on your LJ so I can link to it and you can collect the adoration.

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Date: 2007-09-27 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sea-yeah.livejournal.com
Love love love - mucho loves.

Date: 2007-09-28 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjanelly.livejournal.com
Yay! Thanks.
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